A Letter To Love Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

A Letter To Love

Rating: 4.4


Love...
will you stay till I close my eyes
and my dreams take hold
I promise I will not let go
of the one who comes
so close to knowing.
... Love...
will you stay here?
stay here, for us?
stay until the clouds
on which we reside
drift apart.
and you can no longer see my eyes.
... Love...
I've been cold... and weary
it seems like forever now
I have begun to loose my hope
... Love...
won't you come keep me company awhile?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Very skilful writing. Though poignant and subtly emotional

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Shane Clawson 19 December 2007

I hope your skill in writing will never depart.. wish this letter of luv never ended. Thanx for sharing!

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Peter Lebuhn 11 February 2006

Never lose hope Eila You never know when and where love will turn up next Namaste Peter

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Elya Thorn 10 February 2006

very beautiful, meaningful! I love this poem very much! ~~Elya Thorn~~

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Uriah Hamilton 30 September 2005

I hope the answer is yes, unless she is skirting around to visit me.

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