A Letter To The Unborn Child Poem by Ernest Makuakua

A Letter To The Unborn Child

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A simple letter to the unborn baby.

Dear: Unborn child

just incase you make it to this world bear in mind that you are entering a world with no mercy a world with no heart a world where a smile its a greened face.

Dear child all of your beliefs should be wise. Human dont live forever. Ey even that same womb which gave you birth can turn its back on you even that guy who transfered you to be fertilised can turn tables yes i a talking.

Even that friend you grow with and trust wont be arround at all times when needed
yes it is still me
Dear child even that money that you chuck in your pocket wont protect you
not even that gun you will carry
not even that intelligence you have not even that church you go to not even that school you go to

dear unborn baby troubles arent supposed to be kept inside they destroy you.
That smoking habit
if i said too much you will tell me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Asif Andalib 24 November 2012

You have warned the unborn baby about how hard life can be but there are good aspects of life as well. That's why you could inspire him too. Anyway I like it. Keep on writing

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Hans Vr 23 November 2012

Honest and a bit brutal. I like the honesty, I like the bit of brutality in the poem Life can be harsh, life can be hard Our bodies can hurt thornfully Our hearts can hurt sorrowfully Our minds can hurt seemingly endlessly but our soul is soothing always If we manage to find our soul deep inside If we manage to find that little light inside That little light that can connect and unite We may mange to rise above our troubles and live a llife with purpose sometimes a small smile and small good deed is a great beginning. Good Poem, Ernest

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