A Liberated Woman? . Poem by surya surya

A Liberated Woman? .

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most woman to day are highly liberated lot,
they no longer care to, wake up early and
greet their hubbies with a cup of coffee, but
expect hubbies to take lead in coffee et all.

they have abandoned the traditional sari, that is
a marvel in design, concept, etiquette, comfort
that goes to show case them, beautiful and
elegant what ever be their real form, color, height,
weight et all and many formulations in wear.

jeans they wear are tight at the precious site,
and showcase their butt to the actual contour,
is a marvel, as to how they make jeans to such
perfection in size and seating, like Shakespeare
had said “a chair that fits buttocks of all sizes”.

such tight fitting at precious frontal site lead
to trouble in urinary tract, and may lead to
kidney, besides affects fertility in woman, .
it is amazing ladies in western countries wear,
half skirt, sleeveless blouse in freezing cold
while their men wear full suite, tie and boots,
that protects them from detrimental cold.

such exposure to earn a coveted quote on
their, “sexuality” does last few seconds, while
those, in traditional saris stay excited for the
men when exposed up to their heels, while
exposed up to their knee, they go crazy,
wild and delirious, . for any thing covered
causes excitement and while those
exposed bare, declines in excitement
as in “proximity leads to contempt”.

beauty does not lie in exposure of vitals
and chemicals, but in healthy body, mind,
compassion, love for family, elders, kids
and, colleagues, that reflects in them
as 'inner beauty', an instant hit with men.

the bridal make that woman plan days
together, with lakhs spend, does not last
even a day as the groom seeks to remove
it, earliest when the mighty sun calls it a day.

physical attraction too does not last a day,
as the the real test lies in their mutual
understanding that depends on the “zing thing”
in woman, exclusive in them, like finger
prints that are dissimilar in any two.

woman today are still lucky, as men despite
their dominance in life and work, when back
home and after a shower and dinner, attention
to kids seeks them out like a lazy pet, and falls
back on their impressive bust, for love and
comfort for the rest of the night with them.

if woman still want a highly liberated life, men
might go astray, with home shifted often, children
delivered and abandoned at locations, like in wild
affected by vagaries of nature and deprived of love.
does any woman wants this to happen to them? ! .
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dream Catcher 15 September 2009

you confuse liberation with being fashion obsessed...or maybe you re saying the women of today consider being foolishly fashionable as liberation. Me, i really love the sari and wait for the day when i ll grow up so i can wear it, u see im just 15 :) nice poem it kinda engrossed me, i like the way u give it a funny touch.

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Bob Gibson 02 August 2009

A liberated woman, is equal in thought, body, and mind! if you wish her to be covered! do the same in kind! Why should other woman see your form, when theirs are hidden? why flaunt your body Sir! when a woman body's forbidden! double standards but still a good poem!

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Broken Heart 03 August 2009

a great poem...loved it thanx for sharing... also take time to read my poems too... regards broken heart..

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Ravi A 03 August 2009

Well said but who is going to pay attention? Today's generation has a very misconception about freedom. Feedom is not equality. In this material world, such equality can never be achieved. Our roles are different. We are bound by space and time, names and forms. Freedom is that state of life which is achieved out of sharing life. Life is a question of inter dependency. This is not slavery. Two atoms live peacefully sharing a common territory and common life. We have to learn a lot out of this. Fredom and slavery - both exist only in our thoughts and not in actuality. If I think that I am deprived of freedom, then, that is all.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 03 August 2009

you have brought out the beauty of traditional wear...wonderful

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Koshal Sharma 13 May 2022

Nice on poetic description, yet we shall not judge any one, every body who does any thing have some context to it

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 August 2015

Nice work with the muse of things seen around us today. Yes! The dressing code.

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Chinedu Dike 26 April 2015

Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. I concur with the poet's perspective on the desirability of the traditional role of woman against the so called role of liberated women. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Mandara Pookal 05 December 2009

Your very explosive poem is an eyeopener to such 'liberated' women who can guess the consequences of their actions..............thanks for sharing, mandara

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Uchenna Nnodum 20 October 2009

a rhetorical question for the title. A very nice work on the essay of the modern woman.thanks for sharing.

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