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most woman to day are highly liberated lot,
they no longer care to, wake up early and
greet their hubbies with a cup of coffee, but
expect hubbies to take lead in coffee et all.
they have abandoned the traditional sari, that is
a marvel in design, concept, etiquette, comfort
that goes to show case them, beautiful and
elegant what ever be their real form, color, height,
weight et all and many formulations in wear.
jeans they wear are tight at the precious site,
and showcase their butt to the actual contour,
is a marvel, as to how they make jeans to such
perfection in size and seating, like Shakespeare
had said "a chair that fits buttocks of all sizes".
such tight fitting at precious frontal site lead
to trouble in urinary tract, and may lead to
kidney, besides affects fertility in woman, .
it is amazing ladies in western countries wear,
half skirt, sleeveless blouse in freezing cold
while their men wear full suite, tie and boots,
that protects them from detrimental cold.
such exposure to earn a coveted quote on
their, "sexuality" does last few seconds, while
those, in traditional saris stay excited for the
men when exposed up to their heels, while
exposed up to their knee, they go crazy,
wild and delirious, . for any thing covered
causes excitement and while those
exposed bare, declines in excitement
as in "proximity leads to contempt".
beauty does not lie in exposure of vitals
and chemicals, but in healthy body, mind,
compassion, love for family, elders, kids
and, colleagues, that reflects in them
as 'inner beauty', an instant hit with men.
the bridal make that woman plan days
together, with lakhs spend, does not last
even a day as the groom seeks to remove
it, earliest when the mighty sun calls it a day.
physical attraction too does not last a day,
as the the real test lies in their mutual
understanding that depends on the "zing thing"
in woman, exclusive in them, like finger
prints that are dissimilar in any two.
woman today are still lucky, as men despite
their dominance in life and work, when back
home and after a shower and dinner, attention
to kids seeks them out like a lazy pet, and falls
back on their impressive bust, for love and
comfort for the rest of the night with them.
if woman still want a highly liberated life, men
might go astray, with home shifted often, children
delivered and abandoned at locations, like in wild
affected by vagaries of nature and deprived of love.
does any woman wants this to happen to them? ! .
- o 0 o -
surya surya
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Sunday, July 26, 2009 |
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Thursday, November 24, 2011 |
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Comments about this poem (a liberated woman? .
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Faeo 'Lyre' Clive (4/2/2010 3:54:00 AM)
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Your poem_a liberated woman is didactical, full of sense
and thought-proking.
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Mandara Pookal (12/5/2009 11:44:00 PM)
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Your very explosive poem is an eyeopener to such 'liberated' women who can guess the consequences of their actions..............thanks for sharing, mandara
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Uchenna Nnodum (10/20/2009 9:38:00 PM)
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a rhetorical question for the title. A very nice work on the essay of the modern woman.thanks for sharing.
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Prashant Shaurya (10/9/2009 2:12:00 AM)
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waaw....
you have created a masterpiece sir...
and have covered almost all the dimensions..
10++++++++++
Regards:
prashant
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Ratnaprabha Raykar (10/5/2009 5:03:00 AM)
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its great you have left no stone unturned, dealt intelligently with the whole issue
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Pranav Kumar (10/3/2009 11:31:00 PM)
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great poem no words I gave a ten.
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comatose (10/3/2009 5:46:00 AM)
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gave it a ten
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Niken Kusuma Wardani (9/26/2009 1:01:00 AM)
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I don't really agree to yr lines.. u can't just justify the liberation mostly in the way woman dress nowadays. Yes, some of women had unwritten agendas on their exposed body (through they minimalist-clothes) . But I also see many women try to catch the family & career both in her full devotion (with fully clothes) . And for me, to find the kid still linger in my side after crazy-work-hours is a special gift of God. Sorry that u didn't share the comfort idea of jeans (i even wear it at work) . Anyway... i like this great poem. i appreciate your view, tks for share.
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Zachary Clark (9/20/2009 4:13:00 PM)
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This is a lovely poem and it is true. There is a few good things about a free woman though. A guy can show his passion to a girl easier without the family be wooed. The girl can hangout with the guy more cause the guy does some work. When they both share work they grab a hold of a close bond.
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