Leslie Philibert

Freshman - 900 Points (6th March 1954 / London, England)

A Lifting Of Birds - Poem by Leslie Philibert

Hard as an empty factory, a sea of glass
eaves brown with rust and first rain

squares of light oblongate through broken panes
as the day creeps, almost a church service

with the soft thrashing of pigeon wings,
shadows across blackened brick

as an oil moon creeps over a battered roof
and a grey steel door bangs an obscure tact

with the first cold green starting, newspapers
and plastic bags flattering like shot birds

encoded by grease, a naked lightbulb swings over
an empty chair, the evening breeze failing

there is little hope here, nothing too much to save,
just the idle gathering of soot and distant traffic.


Comments about A Lifting Of Birds by Leslie Philibert

  • Rookie - 301 Points Chris G. Vaillancourt (5/9/2014 9:22:00 AM)

    I enjoy your usage of words here, and in your work in general. there are layers of images to explore in this piece. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 8,058 Points Bri Edwards (1/24/2013 5:07:00 PM)

    i agree with other comments. now i'll look at another. t.f.s. bri (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aivilo Gnuoy (8/8/2012 3:07:00 PM)

    Interesting but I dont quite understand the poem. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Thomas A Robinson (7/19/2012 6:36:00 PM)

    I feel there is more than an old delapidated building here. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 11, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 12, 2012


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