! ! A Line From His Cheeks Poem by Inner Whispers

! ! A Line From His Cheeks

Rating: 2.6


He gaze at the sky, asking for answers for all his why's
Where have been the stars, only moon beckons afar?
His face is hopeful but sad
His heart full of love but empty
And only his heart knows
The bleed of longing, his aura shows.

He draw deep breath,
Hearing her say the love she have,
Sound of it warmth his heart but chill his soul that crave
From the solitude moment he now have like grave,
Only silence is heard, nothing to taste and feel
Feeling the pain totally insane.

A line draw from his eyes down his cheeks
Tried to hide, wipe it but it peeks,
Ah...when will he get the completeness he seeks
How long will he wait, tears flowing profusely
When can he have the woman he dearly loves immensely?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varanasi Ramabrahmam 11 September 2009

A fine aesthetic verse full of empathy and care. Nice poem.

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Obinna Eruchie 03 September 2009

How those lines show how depressing the man is in need of love especially these last ones, 'A line draw from his eyes down his cheeks/ Tried to hide, wipe it but it peeks, / Ah...when will he get the completeness he seeks/ How long will he wait, tears flowing profusely/. When can he have the woman he loves immensely? ' Touching to read.

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