A Little Blue Poem by David Darbyshire

A Little Blue

Rating: 5.0


Got a stone in my shoe,
wondering what I should do?
Also have a splinter in my finger,
feeling a little blue.

Got something in my eye,
but I am not going to cry.
Gonna go see the doc,
to get rid of that rock.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny Reynolds 14 September 2006

Dave, there's a bunch of session guys who go under the name, 'Little Blue'. Give them a listen, and they'll cheer you up. Danny

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Know the feeling, which you understate, in semi-detached manner, D; this is effective. (But we don't want you to feel blue....) t x

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Ernestine Northover 14 September 2006

I think you might put your foot in it somehow when the Doc sees you. Still it's a start I suppose. Ha! Funny clever write. Enjoyed it. Love Ernestine XXX

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Dawn Fuzan 14 May 2014

Mr darbyshire Amazing poetic style here, well done

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Melvina Germain 16 February 2007

Ahh David, that's really sweet, love it---Melvina---

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kAy BaRCeLon 24 September 2006

I could listen to you all day... You are a lot of fun! You are the coolest... take care, k

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Duncan Wyllie 24 September 2006

Great one this, roll out the barrel of fun, Love duncan X

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Nalini Hebbar 14 September 2006

dave...3 miseries...no wonder you are feeling blue...now you have filled my heart with rocks...big ones...lol...love...nalini

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