BEAU GOLDEN

Rookie (1565 / Earth, USA, California, Los Angeles, Van Nuys, Balboa blvd)

A Little Boy Wrote A Rhyme - Poem by BEAU GOLDEN

Many days ago a little girl laughed
A little boy wrote a rhyme,
Life was fun life was right,
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Comments about A Little Boy Wrote A Rhyme by BEAU GOLDEN

  • Rookie - 121 Points Maia Padua (7/21/2009 4:57:00 PM)

    with a touch of innocence..
    classical...the title is captivating..
    the thoughts are impressive
    interesting to read...a story in poetry...
    10+++

    lovelots,
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  • Rookie Luwi Habte (7/21/2009 3:25:00 PM)

    well penned
    i like the story
    well done poet
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  • Rookie - 460 Points marvin brato (10/19/2007 6:45:00 AM)

    A classic story in poetry, enjoyed it! Top marks. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Original Unknown Girl (3/30/2007 9:13:00 AM)

    Wow what a lovely tale and one written 17 years ago, how great! (Wish I could find some of my old poetry) . Beau this is such a poignant read, I can sense this girl never left you, what is it with unfinished love, seems to leave a mild smouldering that never quite goes.... Lovely piece. HG: -) xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 39 Points Patricia Gale (2/25/2007 8:01:00 PM)

    Amazing piece.. the twist adds well. (Report) Reply








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