A Little Happiness Poem by Asif Andalib

A Little Happiness

Rating: 3.8


Baby now-a-days you make me so depress
I want to borrow a little happiness!

It’s very hard to make you passionate
It seems I don’t know how to change my fate!

Now I think you are not my cup of tea
You are like a lost treasure in deep sea!

As if I am in love with the Satan
Who doesn’t know how to love a human!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kamel kamel 10 October 2011

As if I am in love with the Satan Who doesn’t know how to love a human a strong expression nice poem

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Akanksha Bhatt 13 October 2012

very beautiful poem! really very nicely written! thanks for sharing!

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George Bernard Hough 26 November 2011

Another heartfelt poem fitting between the previous two I read, I may have been tempted to say ' Who doesn`t know how to love a man' but who am I to comment, another enjoyable look into life.

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Wang Qian 15 October 2011

Really a wonderful one! Especially the last two lines, feel the power of your poem ~

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Jinal Oswal 13 October 2011

The last two lines are awesome, well concluded :)

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David Ration Lekoba 10 October 2011

Certainly your last verse dresses up the language of your poem. it creates the deep sense of feeling that has been dettached between the two lovers in the poem. it's a deep expression of love possible lost>>>> if the poet compairs his love to satan who knows no love! ! ! wow...beautiful

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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