A Lollipop Lady And A Lollipop Man Poem by nimal dunuhinga

A Lollipop Lady And A Lollipop Man

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The reckless drivers like a jet fly and they think the road is a sky.
These two personnel hold a circular sign on a stick to stop traffic.
And the children cross the road.
They too like to go with them to their school but they have lost their certificates of birth.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 01 September 2006

Your passion for social justice shines through this cautionary tale of the two lollipop people ensuring a safe crossing for the fortunate school children from the lunatics on wheels. Wonderful poem, Nimal. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Duncan Wyllie 28 August 2006

I agree with Frank, there is so much more in this then meets the eye, A solid piece Love duncan X

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Sandra Fowler 27 August 2006

Fascinating title. You have a gift for drawing sharp contrasts between those who have and those who have not. Regards, Sandra

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 27 August 2006

Abstract Write with an intruiging spin....succinctly clever''''''''''''''''''''''''''fjr

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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