A Lonely Hope Poem by Joshua Gallatin

A Lonely Hope

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find yourself nightly thinking
creating doubt and uncertainty
a negative self consciousness
is the only remaining hope
darkness overcomes your innermost
small obstacles become large walls
then you build your own
closing a heart you want caressed
the love you search
becomes to much
it is the beginning and end
everything you want is out of reach
break down a wall and open a chance
the time has come
let your heart breathe
believe in yourself at last
it may not be much
but believe in this lonely hope
and a beautiful smile
will not quickly pass
cuddle yourself
and love your friends
let no one deny
the success at your hands

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 30 December 2008

If we all have one single hope it will shine out into the world and bring hope to everyone...good piece...thank you

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 20 December 2008

The hope is like the shine on your forehead, its shown.Check if you have the shine. Nice piece Joshua.

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