A Lonely Star (2) Poem by Wassila Nader
A Lonely Star (2)
How are you my star?
Are you still alone?
Or you talked to the moon?
And why are u so sad? did he came?
Or still the same?
the star replied:
Yeah he came,
And said the same,
He also wanna die,
Cuz no one in the sky, cares or even try,
to be his friend,
All stars told him that he's the worst to be a friend,
And he'll live alone,
Then he'll be thrown......
But I told him NO! ! ! !
You are a good friend,
And I'm here to be your friend,
we'll fly together in the sky..
He told me NO! ! !
I came life alone,
I'll live alone, then I'll be thrown..........: (
So I'm still alone,
And I'll stay forever alone like him,
I wont fly, but i'll cry
Till I die
Cuz no one in the sky cares or even try to be my friend............
(This poem is dedicated to the lonely people in this world...)
i like the way you express your emotions, but you have some grammatical mistakes. try to avoid them in the future please check out my poem 'i am my own exorcist'. comments and rates are highly appreciated
A soliloquy...a good intention of verses.... And I agree with Ahmed with his suggestion...
another star which is alone: o(oh my....its just awesome this poem contains very good narative 10+
Good work Wassila...Now nobody is lonely anymore for they have Wassila on their side. So sweet of you. A sweet 10. Ranjit.
the pangs of loneliness are worst than death...well depicted in this emotional poem
I thank you with all my heart for writing this one...thank you so much.
Perfect dear friend please allow me to say wat Aashka Thakkar said that ur inner soul is good and carries alot of feelings
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 12:52:28 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Lots of lonely people in this world.