A Long March Poem by ramesh rai

A Long March

Rating: 4.2


Your life may blossom in Love and Peace
Through Love and Struggle you have to go on
You have to march for a brightening future
for the mankind.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
William Jackson 16 August 2011

Well said. The march is long, and we have songs to sing.

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Allemagne Roßmann 16 September 2011

Reminds me of the french national anthem verses........ Marchez! Marchez! ...citiyonettes...Allons! Enfants de la Patrie..Aux arms citiyons..Formez bataillons..Qu`un sung impur Abreuve nos sillons....... Well written Sir

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Akhtar Jawad 01 June 2014

Nice and beautiful lines. I liked it.

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Heather Wilkins 14 June 2013

excellent thoughts here. We all must march on into the future.

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Unwritten Soul 24 April 2012

A good body mind coordination for a long march...Battle of health, War in emotions but we still strong to keep marching never ending..till the music of shaking ground end, we keep it going and we will marching in any battle and war...since birth to death keep on marching for everyone peace and love_Unwritten Soul

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Sally Plumb Plumb 07 February 2012

It is truly a long march.I'm still on the move at 71.

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Rekha Mandagere 24 November 2011

Nice long march! Friend, let it continue to understand and serve mankind. But who it id, must be very near and dear to you.Thanks for sharing.

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