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Lee Crowell
(6/2/2009 6:29:00 PM) |
19? you have the wisdom of an elder
I suggest you read two of my poems
'this poet'
'take it down'
and anything else you might find
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Aiden Howarth
(9/16/2008 5:44:00 AM) |
Excellent use of words in this poem! Very descriptive and very moving!
Keep up the great work! x
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Cathleen Hodgkinson
(6/7/2008 10:45:00 PM) |
Celine I love your way with words...your emotions expressed perfectly....all lovers do live by longing...as most of us have experienced...a great read.-Cathy
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Abdullahi Diriye
(4/25/2008 4:42:00 AM) |
You showed much and rightly so. That for one part in ur poem that all lovers live by longing, and endure. And to one who waits, a minute seems a year! I felt u summoned a vision and declared it pure. Magnificent poem.
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Patrice James
(4/17/2008 6:26:00 AM) |
knowing safety
is near to the heart as
flowers bloom in the time of love.
The feeling now of pain is only a distant memory......what alovely piece.....keep up the good work
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Rani Turton
(4/17/2008 6:17:00 AM) |
This poem makes the imagination soar. Thanks for it.
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Scott Austin
(4/14/2008 10:30:00 PM) |
Your emotions can be felt in the words you have expressed in this write.
Scott
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Kesav Easwaran
(4/12/2008 10:15:00 AM) |
amazing flow of words...falls steep down into and stays put in the reader's heart...
good write, celine
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Cherry Zhai
(4/12/2008 9:04:00 AM) |
A very good poem, reveal your true feelings. You are very emotional.
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