A Look, Two Eyes Poem by Mike Tonkin

A Look, Two Eyes

Rating: 5.0


A look. Two eyes
Filled with yearning.
A look. Two eyes
Gently burning
Into mine.
Such warmth,
Such tenderness
Was in those eyes,
it was as if the trembling sky
Looked on me.
A look. Two eyes
Searching and discerning in mine
A gaze returning, the tenderness
And lit with such intensity
As to make her tremble like the sky.
A look. Two eyes.
Holding my world,
Causing me to unfold
From within myself
And pour out through my eyes
My love for her.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruth Walters 20 December 2012

similar to the previous poem in style, cleverly holding the reader.....

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Original Unknown Girl 21 June 2007

This is stunning, I love it, so intense, so romantic. The eyes have it.... as they say. Great work here. HG: -) xx

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Who's Erwhatsit 17 June 2007

Intense and beautifully honest words. DK

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