A Love Poem by Jameaka Shibles

Too much repetition try saying 'a love so great' differently

I like this poem Jameaka (lovely name) because you leave me in no doubt what you are looking for - A LOVE SO GREAT - This is what you are Looking for - Wishing for - Hoping for. More than that you want a LOVE that let you CRY and let you be MAD - a love that will never FAIL. WOW - that is some request for a mere man to fulfil. However we are out there - some even in your age group - Men who are sensitive to what it is young ladies really really want. Who will fufil your hopes and wishes and will empathise (and not laugh) when you CRY and will appreciate that all ladies go MAD every now and again. So keep hoping (and praying) Jameaka - and some day soon you will get the desires of your heart. Personally I think it is a perfect poem as written - but then I'm biased because you are from Oregon - and that's a great State to be in. Thanks for sharing - Love in Poetry - JOHN . .

We all look for that special person, in which love, could never cease through anything. Phenomenal piece.

And a love so great one day you shall find Jameaka! With such a beautiful and well penned words coming from your heart! I see no problem finding a Love so great! 10+++ If time permits, please read my poems titled: A MISSING ANGEL and AN ANGEL AND VIOLIN! Enjoy them! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from NYC....

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you make me smile with your words don't worry you'll find your love so great just like how we found ours we just found ours a little ahead of you.

Lovely my friend...............