Lindemberg Pereira da Silva

Rookie (04/03/1985 / Brazil)

'A Love Larger Than Life' - Poem by Lindemberg Pereira da Silva

'Em ti a minha sorte,
A minha vida em ti;
E quando venha a morte,
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Comments about 'A Love Larger Than Life' by Lindemberg Pereira da Silva

  • Rookie Emma Kessler (12/13/2009 7:35:00 PM)

    Wonderful yet again, Lindemberg. A very deep and moving poem.
    To improve the English of it you could change, 'I wanna be gifted by your company' to 'I want to be gifted by your company' and 'Don't say me goodbye' to 'Don't tell my goodbye' and 'Because lied in your arms' to 'Because lying in your arms'. I hope that helps you on your English. (Report) Reply

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