A Love's Desire Poem by Romeo Della Valle
A Love's Desire
In my desperate need
To know of your whereabouts,
I asked the moon about you
And it turned its back on me, ,
Trying to hide behind a cloud...
I also asked the stars
With no response at all...
I had no choice, indeed,
But ask for help from above,
Since, witnesses they were both
Of our passionate love...
Now, stuck with inquire without result,
I am alone, sad and really hurt,
Making everything sounds like a satire,
Getting old and tired...
One question remaining,
Should I give up
Love's matters
And retire?
Her, and the whole world
Have the response...
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Very passionate and romantic story, don't forget that you are a great poet, never stop writting. There is love in every coner, you may just not no were to look, Soon the moon will give a response of you eternal soulmate, Juliet She who is you eternal enemy (if you no the story) So never give up on love it will soon come to you.
'In my desperate need To know of your whereabouts, I asked the moon about you And it turned its back on me' I love the first part of this verse - it's stunning in its simplicity. This is a beautiful poem - thank you for sharing. Danielle
Love is a strong bond and you gave us a fine proof out of this elegy.
wow..well done i really like it.love is so DESIREable i mean its so passionate. it leaves you breathless..
‘…Should I give up // Love's matters // And retire? …’ No never because thro’ no answer is a kind of answer…LOVE is undying... Ten+ Ms. Nivedita UK
This is a touching piece in which one seeks an answer to the loss of love. Nice piece!
Should I give up nice sad confessional surrealistic poem, very well written 10++++++++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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wow that was sweet and sad i think that no matter what love will be found if you just believe good job!