A Love's Game Poem by Romeo Della Valle

A Love's Game

Rating: 4.9


Once you were the moon
And I was the sun,
I was a gardener
And you a beautiful rose...
You were the diamond
And I was the ring...
Two bodies, one soul
Great moments we shared
And I still recall...
The time we spent together
Was not a waste of time at all...
For one reason or another,
Love became a game,
Strategies were not exchanged
Since it was just your game
You tried to drive me insane
But little did you know
Things drastically have changed
For, I am far from being the same...
Now, we are heading some where
But not on the same lane...


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 23 September 2009

Fabulous written poem of love's game! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10++++++++++

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Surya . 24 September 2009

a love, s game never ends. its memmory will haunt you. a wonderful poem. voted10 surya

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Noel Horlanda 27 September 2009

What a relationship, going to the gutter I supposed. Well penned 10+

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Rehana Nazli 01 October 2009

Since it was just your game You tried to drive me insane But little did you know Things drastically have changed For, I am far from being the same... Now, we are heading some where But not on the same lane... Fantastic lines; full of rythm and rhyme...I simply loved its flow and the meanigfullness that you convey very assertively in this poem..10/10

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 03 October 2009

Two hearts, like lovers meet...coincidentally, from the start. Until a spark of a togetherness shared and undeniably dependent on one another. For one a game! For the other, a repeated need. Nice work, Romeo.

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Elena Sandu 05 August 2010

Once you were the moon And I was the sun, I was a gardener And you a beautiful rose... You were the diamond And I was the ring... Two bodies, one soul The start seems right I thought you did find the One! ..for..true love..I thnk I need not to expect but give!

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Marieta Maglas 18 June 2010

Warm, captivating and completely writing.Many memorable lines in this one. Poetry is certainly in your blood. Thank you for sharing.Mari.

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Danielle Guscott 04 December 2009

Great poem - touch of sadness in an otherwise sweet poem. Reality can ruin fantasy. Close to my heart right now. Thanks for sharing

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Indira Babbellapati 16 November 2009

ravages of time...! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Mohammed Hassan 29 October 2009

i find it so close to hearts great work mister romio keep it up 10+++

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