{a Love Song} Poem by Lillian Jamison

{a Love Song}

Rating: 3.9


The beat of my heart
With yours so in sync
Of all melodies played
The one I forever wish to hear

The smile upon my lips
A reason for joy
Brightness to my day
Bringing laughter to my life

Advice, warmth and comfort
In me burns desire
And so I revel in
All that you are.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
poetry lover 13 November 2007

Very lovely, great write.

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Sandra Fowler 13 November 2007

Very warm and genuine. Praise for your romantic soul. As always, Sandra

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Patricia Gale 18 April 2008

The deepth of love within you pen.. Well done Patricia

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Dr.subhendu Kar 18 November 2007

as heart when reveled by the depth of love and love when razzled by the depth of warmth resourced from within that precipitates by the melodis thrumming the lips, beautiful write yet Lilly xox, i like it and i credt with10+, thanks for sharing

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Rosemary Dupree 16 November 2007

Love songs always speak to the heart just like this well written poem Rosemary

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Vipin Trisal 14 November 2007

the melody of love.....its a great poem

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 13 November 2007

Romantic and smooth...last 2 lines define the tone you set from the start. Excellent write, young Belle! ~ ~ ~

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