Gordon Tseng

Rookie (Taiwan)

A Love Song By The Star - Poem by Gordon Tseng

Singing a love song, wandering in that peaceful and lonely night,
The blinking star lets his touching notes take a ride with the moonlight.
To thank the moon for her fan-like listening, her generous free flight,
The notes dance on the black sleepy ocean, make it excited and silver white.


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Comments about A Love Song By The Star by Gordon Tseng

  • Gold Star - 10,939 Points Soulful Heart (1/3/2013 12:54:00 AM)

    the words surely glide through the miles in tranquil beauty...... (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,260 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (11/26/2012 12:11:00 PM)

    A wondrous love poem with nature's magical gifts presented with d poet's pen. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,840 Points * Sunprincess * (11/8/2012 11:07:00 PM)

    wow..this is so picturesque..feel like i was riding on the moonlight with the star's love notes..fabulous. :) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,442 Points Naida Nepascua Supnet (9/12/2012 10:29:00 AM)

    you are so good especially when you write about the moon (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points yellowbell alamanda (9/7/2012 2:00:00 AM)

    The poem was like a shallow then deep shore line..Wanderous. A soul's craddle. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,269 Points Unwritten Soul (9/5/2012 6:15:00 AM)

    The poem felt so good to feel, and the title, i loved it! _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Besa Dede (3/6/2012 12:49:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem!
    Singing a love song, wandering in that peaceful and lonely night,
    The blinking star lets his touching notes take a ride with the moonlight.
    Wonderful creation, and beautifully described setting! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gordon Tseng (3/5/2012 9:27:00 PM)

    Please read my poem QUASI-QUATRAIN for the answer of the question below. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,276 Points Shahzia Batool (2/29/2012 12:57:00 PM)

    what celestial merry-making! it's an allegory with sensuousness! a feast for imagination! but naturally one is tempted to ask...why this four line composition? ? ? (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,796 Points Wahab Abdul (2/29/2012 10:50:00 AM)

    well said and well crafted piece of poetry. I like it. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,937 Points Elena Sandu (2/21/2012 10:39:00 PM)

    Wow a beautiful little story, loving image of dancing notes and silver white ocean, thank you! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 21, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, January 4, 2013


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