A Love Story Of Rains Poem by Akhtar Jawad

A Love Story Of Rains

Rating: 5.0


She rises from Bay of Bengal,
A piece of beauty and charms,
Black hair black eyes, lean and tall,
And when she spreads her arms,

The sun, the moon and the stars so bright,
Vanish somewhere behind the sky,
And the day, sunny day, is turned into night,
She slows the wind, the birds don't fly.

The teen aged girl is a model of sex,
Ascends from the sea and descends to the earth,
Singing dancing on the apex,
Spreads every where all her wealth.

She looks for a mate,
Has an ideal in her heart,
For a lovely date,
So romantic and smart.

She travels many days,
She travels many nights,
Goes on changing unknown ways,
Pleasing with her wealth so many sights.

And reaches ultimately at the roof of my house,
And there she sees a handsome boy,
A rise of Arabian Sea, her ideal spouse.
A deserving partner a lovely toy.

Violently he embraces her,
Violently he kisses,
His awaited mate, he traces her,
For a year he misses.

Within twinkling of eyes every thing is wet,
The streets are filled with water of rains,
Made every one joyful, whenever they met,
The collision of clouds removes the strains.

The girl hasn't come, and the midnight rain,
Are the tears fell down on the thirsty earth,
His soul is humid and the heart in strain,
He direly needs her sexy wealth.

(When clouds from Bay of Bengal collide with that of Arabian Sea, it causes heavy rains at Karachi)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Heavy rains at Karachi are caused by the collision of two clouds, it fills our lakes and scarcity of water is reduced.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
V P Mahur 13 June 2014

Dear Bro, Lovely poem with elaborated imagery. Thanks for your appreciation of the poem. I feel so obliged that you read each of my latest poems.

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Kirti Sharma 14 June 2014

wow! amazing write! ! i like the rhymes and the flow of your poem! ! beautiful love story.. :)

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Ramesh Rai 14 June 2014

beautiful write sir. we are also waiting for her to grace upon us.

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Khalid Saifullah 15 February 2017

Beautiful and romantic......................................................

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Khalida Bano Ali 28 December 2014

A beautiful poem.....................10

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Valsa George 24 July 2014

Wonderful imagination........ The voluptuous journey of rain clouds for a mate and at the moment of consummation, a down pour of ecstatic showers!

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Ruma Chaudhuri 16 June 2014

Its an excellent poem and I read it for 2 / 3 times and really like the excellent imagination of cloud. Yes only you can make the cloud in that way. My vocabulary is not so strong to express your poem in short. Its a nice poem.

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Savita Tyagi 15 June 2014

Beautiful write and wonderful imagery. Heart goes back instantly to monsoon rains. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem.

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