A Love To Live Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

A Love To Live

Rating: 4.6


“I am prepared and ready to leave”
Wife was in rage which I couldn’t believe?
Who can help me to get relieved?
Why do you all stand together and connive?

It all started with fun fare
I was ready to lead her anywhere
I chose her to be as my better half
did that prove as simple joke or matter of laugh?

I did earnestly what I was supposed to do
I too expected her to fall through
We were to be one and remain in all our drive
We were to make it heaven and live

I swore in the name of God
With all sincerity and high hopes rode
Let destiny may prove my sincerity
Life was to be made worth of good quality’

No one may notice what we really achieved?
They will only observe and note how much we missed?
It is altogether not our concern to think
As we had vowed to swim together and sink

I shall worry about better tomorrow
Fall in line with her and good steps to allow
Hand in hand with full confidence to walk along
Never to find faults even if one was right or wrong

I strove very hard to accommodate her
Taking all steps for storms to wither
Bridging gap all the times and creating confidence
Clearing all lines with drawing correct inference

We may come to be known as ideal couple or pair
Not always playing music around the chair
Something more to make it worthy and worthwhile
I shall continue to look for good and live in peace meanwhile

It is how two wheels of vehicle move together
Let there be strong criticism but not to bother
Sun may shine one day and add to glory or feather
It is how we take it person in stride or honor

We have pledged to honor bond till the end
We shall remain not foe but always as friend
It will always be ruling from our side to fall
To the wishes of each other and lovingly call


Try to stand firm in our holy commitment
You should never feel sore or discontentment
It may loose the beautiful flavor and fragrance
You may not be able to walk any more with elegance

I shall not rule out scuffle orbiter talk
You may sometimes prefer not to walk
Still path may remain wide open
We got to bridge the gap and reopen

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kunwar Patel 30 September 2010

It all started with fun fare I was ready to lead her anywhere

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Sejal Kapadia 21 April 2010

am prepared and ready to leave” Wife was in rage which I couldn’t believe? Who can help me to...nice to read.....10

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Mark Nwagwu 12 April 2010

this is lovely and bouncing; gives love all its wholesome and life-giving meaning. loved this, hasmukh.

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Haven Chernov 03 April 2010

I really liked it and the message it portrayed.

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Samuel Pennell 03 April 2010

That was terrific! I really enjoyed the grander, philosophical message!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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