MELVIN BANGGOLLAY

Rookie - 74 Points (11/07/1975 / Natonin, Mountain Province, Philippines)

A Love Went Wrong


The sun keep on shining high
With sweet and tender smiles
As melody of rhythm fill the sky
with scents of joy more than mile.

I never thought I could ever sigh
with needles of pains every while
As the wind whispers me to fly
the tears of sorrows in my eyes.

I love to fumble a lovely melody
rejoicing for having your serenity
but when you gifted me infidelity
I hung my guitar to rest eternally.

I may not be perfect as you see
But never did I love somebody
For I vowed to serve forever thee
until my life be gone someday.

But with the Grace of God for me
Let the wheel of fate take me faithfully
To where I may rest and find glory
of a true love untarnished till eternity.

Submitted: Monday, March 10, 2008
Edited: Friday, May 24, 2013

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  • Rookie - 204 Points Naida Nepascua Supnet (8/5/2011 6:29:00 PM)

    my favorite line here is, I hung my guitar to rest eternally-it is very meaningful, it says many things, and i see the picture you want to paint on this poem.

    you are good at words, you express well. Mabuhay ang Manunulang Pinoy sa Poemhunter. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Kesav Easwaran (4/23/2009 4:05:00 AM)

    love lost is heart lost...beautiful write in good rhythm and rhyme expressing the pain of love that lost...good work, Melvin...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie K. V. Venkataramana (4/19/2008 12:19:00 PM)

    'when you gifted me infidelity
    I hung my guitar to rest eternally. '

    Very moving lines from an accomplished poet. I enyoyed reading this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 39 Points Malini Kadir (3/24/2008 1:11:00 AM)

    A soul touching piece of work I loved this poetry...........the way you put it
    but when you gifted me infidelity
    I hung my guitar to rest eternally.........lovely way to express sorrow...... (Report) Reply

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