Rookie - 175 Points (11/07/1975 / Natonin, Mountain Province, Philippines)

A Love Went Wrong Poem by MELVIN BANGGOLLAY

The sun keep on shining high
With sweet and tender smiles
As melody of rhythm fill the sky
with scents of joy more than mile.

I never thought I could ever sigh
with needles of pains every while
As the wind whispers me to fly
the tears of sorrows in my eyes.

I love to fumble a lovely melody
rejoicing for having your serenity
but when you gifted me infidelity
I hung my guitar to rest eternally.

I may not be perfect as you see
But never did I love somebody
For I vowed to serve forever thee
until my life be gone someday.

But with the Grace of God for me
Let the wheel of fate take me faithfully
To where I may rest and find glory
of a true love untarnished till eternity.

Submitted: Monday, March 10, 2008
Edited: Friday, May 24, 2013

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  • Rookie - 276 Points Naida Nepascua Supnet (8/5/2011 6:29:00 PM)

    my favorite line here is, I hung my guitar to rest eternally-it is very meaningful, it says many things, and i see the picture you want to paint on this poem.

    you are good at words, you express well. Mabuhay ang Manunulang Pinoy sa Poemhunter. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 72 Points Kesav Easwaran (4/23/2009 4:05:00 AM)

    love lost is heart lost...beautiful write in good rhythm and rhyme expressing the pain of love that lost...good work, Melvin...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 118 Points Pacific Hernandez (10/3/2008 8:56:00 PM)

    A sorrowful tale of love. Touching. 10 for you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Kelly Curiel-bowser (9/15/2008 5:45:00 PM)

    I sorta like that one ^_^ it is...sweet in an odd way...kind of. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Norchel Tingson (9/5/2008 11:08:00 PM)

    What a touching piece that sways every lover's soul. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie K. V. Venkataramana (4/19/2008 12:19:00 PM)

    'when you gifted me infidelity
    I hung my guitar to rest eternally. '

    Very moving lines from an accomplished poet. I enyoyed reading this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 39 Points Malini Kadir (3/24/2008 1:11:00 AM)

    A soul touching piece of work I loved this poetry...........the way you put it
    but when you gifted me infidelity
    I hung my guitar to rest eternally.........lovely way to express sorrow...... (Report) Reply

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