Geetha Jayakumar

Gold Star - 9,229 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

A Lovely Bride On Way To Funeral! - Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

I often tell my beloved,
Please adorn me with beautiful,
Jasmine flowers.
Like a lovely bride, I should look.
Once, I had long shining silky hair,
And I loved to wear jasmine flowers,
But I cut my hair short.
But don't be stingy
Tuck jasmine flowers only, in my hair.
Cover me with kanjeepuram sari only,
Else I will question you.
As I love to look today,
Like a beautiful bride.
Cover me with full of fragrance,
As I love perfumes,
My eyes to be beautifully drawn with,
Eye Liner.
Of course, be careful as it may hurt me too.
No lipstick as I don't like.
Yeah but scented talcum powder would be fine for me.
And one big bindi on my forehead.
And a small sandal wood paste on top of it.
I should look like a beautiful bride.
Ain't I?

Don't wake up the bride.
She is in her deep sleep....
Let her sleep!

Note..In this poem, I portrayed a scene of a woman whose husband fulfils her last death wishes. Like a bride she was decorated and taken for funeral. Thats why I said last lines...let her sleep...

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014.

Geetha Jayakumar.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Note..In this poem, I portrayed a scene of a woman whose husband fulfils her last death wishes. Like a bride she was decorated and taken for funeral. Thats why I said last lines...let her sleep...

Comments about A Lovely Bride On Way To Funeral! by Geetha Jayakumar

  • Gold Star - 32,058 Points Akhtar Jawad (8/11/2014 2:21:00 PM)

    I have seen many times during my childhood, when a suhagan (a woman whose husband is alive) died she was made a bride before her funeral. That is one of the beauties of Indian culture. You have nicely painted a picture of this centuries old tradition. (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Rookie - 24 Points Sudama Panigrahi (7/2/2014 2:59:00 AM)

    Ah, funeral...how painful for the hubby and at the same time...how mournfully joyous to bid adieu to her fulfilling her last wishes. Pathos......tears...in abundance. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 372 Points Chris G. Vaillancourt (5/8/2014 11:12:00 AM)

    Wonderful way with words (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 122 Points Yash Shinde (4/21/2014 10:46:00 AM)

    .........a touching poem Geetha mam, the tradition of adorning a bride before her last ride, is to celebrate her happiness of dying married.........................an indeed soulful write
    ...........Its really sad to adorn your wife with jewels, and put her in hands of fire........... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,840 Points Lyn Paul (3/31/2014 6:52:00 AM)

    Hello Geetha I have seen many beautiful people sleeping peacefully in their casket. I used to sing to them all when I polished their caskets, just them and I in the room. I often wondered if they were wanting to say Do you mind not singing....... As always I love your words Geetha (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 57 Points Vijay Sai R (2/21/2014 4:08:00 AM)

    emotional flow of words...touchingly poised (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,759 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (2/21/2014 2:34:00 AM)

    Let her sleep an eternal sleep and bridal beauty shines in deference to her wish..........Geetha........a very touching
    poem indeed................... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Dr.tony Brahmin (2/12/2014 11:20:00 AM)

    very much feminine Geetha, thank you .....Cover me with full of fragrance, liked this line very much. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,622 Points Rohit Sapra (9/22/2013 4:48:00 AM)

    Emotions are so beautifully expressed through these verses. It really is worth reading. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,993 Points Kanniappan Kanniappan (9/15/2013 10:13:00 AM)

    Don't make us to cry for the beautiful bride! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,720 Points Neela Nath (9/14/2013 4:47:00 AM)

    Very beautiful poem Geetha. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/13/2013 9:11:00 PM)

    feminine desire with lovely words arranged nicely thank you (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,896 Points Gajanan Mishra (9/13/2013 9:00:00 PM)

    beautiful poem, I like it, thanks for this. (Report) Reply

Read all 13 comments »




Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?



Poem Submitted: Friday, September 13, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, October 31, 2014


[Hata Bildir]