A Lover's Appeal Poem by Rajesh Thankappan

A Lover's Appeal

Rating: 5.0


The planets in the sky mingle
With the stars both dull and bright,
Merges and mingle do rivers with the ocean
After the hurdles they encounter and crosses,
My sweet heart, why not you mingle your love with mine!


Burn all our differences to ashes
Bury it in the marshes,
Hey! Behold the cloud and the hilltop together rest
Bridging their distance with their efforts best
My sweet heart; why not you merge your heart with mine!


Love! Observe the darkness being dispelled
And glorious sunlight outspread her wings
If such things on earth can everyday happen
Why not you now become mine!
Why not you now surrender your mind!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 23 February 2015

Great feelings of love scripted with wonderful lines.....Rajeshji......kudos!

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Geetha Jayakumar 20 July 2014

.Wow.. A fantastic lines... Why not you now become mine! Why not you now surrender your mind! Beautiful poem and pleasant flow of words....And the topic fits perfectly well with poem. Loved reading it.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 October 2013

Why not you now surrender your mind! ... good appeal.. nice one

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