Dr Hitesh Sheth

Rookie - 3 Points (Birth Place: Earth)

A Mansion of Bliss


Love was agape
And earth too began to shake
When they saw divine and his lover
in a secret soul's bower
hugging in adoration's lap

During blushing daybreak
they surreptitiously escaped
to roam on
love drawn map
on Venus landscapes
Wherein flows, love kissed lakes
tickled by devotion's sheldrakes

The mansion
adored by the ruby's swastika
bedecked by diamond's obelisks:
Wherein incandescent chandeliers,
tease by romantic breeze
sings the songs of divine bliss

They retired in love's mansion,
built ever for joyous occasion,
Where jewels of balconies
embraces the palaces,
perching on rosy colonies

They merge in each other
till their breath stopped to labor.
At last, their love for each other ceased
For super soul and soul merged
seamlessly without crease!

Dr Hitesh C Sheth

13/02/2009

Submitted: Friday, February 13, 2009
Edited: Tuesday, February 12, 2013

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  • Rookie - 893 Points Kee Thampi (1/7/2012 11:28:00 PM)

    nature is the mother of humanity the saviour
    During blushing daybreak
    they surreptitiously escaped
    to roam on
    love drawn map
    on Venus landscapes
    Wherein flows, love kissed lakes (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Cindy Kreiner Sera (4/5/2009 12:37:00 PM)

    Beautiful this lover's myth unfolding - pure romanticism...a rose is a rose but brilliance comes in many forms - you have Mastered all. Cindy (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Randy Hogan (2/24/2009 11:46:00 AM)

    Woven into the fabric of time
    thou love as been spoken,
    raise her Veil of love
    and remove from her lip
    for taste you seek,
    sublime ambrosia...........
    this poem is a piece of art....loves art....master piece....... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Maia Padua (2/23/2009 1:52:00 AM)

    a poetry that is adorned with priceless stones...very meaningful
    very valuable.....gleaming with beauty...
    and touching our hearts....divinely..a MANSION of love... a mansion of Soul...a mansion where God dwells...
    very wholesome..words are superbly chosen....
    and the theme is chosen from heart....
    a piece with wonderful imagery...
    i love this...goes to my favorites...
    10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~! (2/14/2009 6:35:00 AM)

    superb written sir.well expressed and nice feelings...
    really a god gift to all poets here as valenties day gift.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 77 Points C. P. Sharma (2/14/2009 6:05:00 AM)

    A majestic mansion with glitter and gleam in which the divine lovers dance in trance. Superbly unique imagery with scrupulously chosen scholatic diction and perfect flow.
    CP (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vinod Kumar (2/14/2009 5:50:00 AM)

    Expression of a divine love built in a strong seamless base, there is no chance to oxidation of that in the worthy mansion, thank you dear Dr.Poet,10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (2/14/2009 5:35:00 AM)

    A poem written fabulously woven with great rhymes and rhythm of the words...Beautiful lovers myth, soulful romanticism..10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 48 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (2/14/2009 2:10:00 AM)

    Good descriptive poem. The union of 'Prakrithi' and 'Purusha', the divine couple........a novel subject attempted. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 637 Points Sadiqullah Khan (2/14/2009 1:44:00 AM)

    The choice of title and what follows is a beautiful rythmic composition with an effort on rhyme. Well woven thoughts and fantastic imaginations.10 (Report) Reply

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