Dr Hitesh Sheth

Rookie - 7 Points (Birth Place: Earth)

A Mansion Of Bliss - Poem by Dr Hitesh Sheth

Love was agape
And earth too began to shake
When they saw divine and his lover
in a secret soul's bower
hugging in adoration's lap

During blushing daybreak
they surreptitiously escaped
to roam on
love drawn map
on Venus landscapes
Wherein flows, love kissed lakes
tickled by devotion's sheldrakes

The mansion
adored by the ruby's swastika
bedecked by diamond's obelisks:
Wherein incandescent chandeliers,
tease by romantic breeze
sings the songs of divine bliss

They retired in love's mansion,
built ever for joyous occasion,
Where jewels of balconies
embraces the palaces,
perching on rosy colonies

They merge in each other
till their breath stopped to labor.
At last, their love for each other ceased
For super soul and soul merged
seamlessly without crease!

Dr Hitesh C Sheth


Comments about A Mansion Of Bliss by Dr Hitesh Sheth

  • Bronze Star - 2,174 Points Kee Thampi (1/7/2012 11:28:00 PM)

    nature is the mother of humanity the saviour
    During blushing daybreak
    they surreptitiously escaped
    to roam on
    love drawn map
    on Venus landscapes
    Wherein flows, love kissed lakes (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (5/30/2009 12:08:00 PM)

    divine romance there...lovely (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Obinna Eruchie (5/28/2009 12:54:00 PM)

    a beautiful romantic poem with vivid imagery. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ****tamara Hanaring.****** , A Thought Mate, (4/27/2009 1:28:00 AM)

    again an other beautiful reading... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 24 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (4/25/2009 11:46:00 PM)

    effective analogy.........................befitting the theme (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 14 Points Bonnie Collins (4/14/2009 12:32:00 AM)

    What a lovely romantic write, and filled with much vivid imagery... Very nice job.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 149 Points Kranthi Pothineni (4/9/2009 2:12:00 AM)

    Really sweet and romantic. Nice. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Cindy Kreiner Sera (4/5/2009 12:37:00 PM)

    Beautiful this lover's myth unfolding - pure romanticism...a rose is a rose but brilliance comes in many forms - you have Mastered all. Cindy (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,582 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (3/16/2009 8:09:00 PM)

    Written with the ink of passionate love.Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Krista Churchill (2/26/2009 12:41:00 AM)

    I feel a lot of love i love it lol.. Its a nice and great poem so nice its a ten

    Krista (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Randy Hogan (2/24/2009 11:46:00 AM)

    Woven into the fabric of time
    thou love as been spoken,
    raise her Veil of love
    and remove from her lip
    for taste you seek,
    sublime ambrosia...........
    this poem is a piece of art....loves art....master piece....... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 121 Points Maia Padua (2/23/2009 1:52:00 AM)

    a poetry that is adorned with priceless stones...very meaningful
    very valuable.....gleaming with beauty...
    and touching our hearts....divinely..a MANSION of love... a mansion of Soul...a mansion where God dwells...
    very wholesome..words are superbly chosen....
    and the theme is chosen from heart....
    a piece with wonderful imagery...
    i love this...goes to my favorites...
    10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (2/21/2009 4:56:00 AM)

    A mansion of huge poetry you have got there my friend. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,205 Points Seema Chowdhury (2/14/2009 8:31:00 AM)

    lovely thoughts and emotions expressed in this poem. thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~! (2/14/2009 6:35:00 AM)

    superb written sir.well expressed and nice feelings...
    really a god gift to all poets here as valenties day gift.... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,779 Points C. P. Sharma (2/14/2009 6:05:00 AM)

    A majestic mansion with glitter and gleam in which the divine lovers dance in trance. Superbly unique imagery with scrupulously chosen scholatic diction and perfect flow.
    CP (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vinod Kumar (2/14/2009 5:50:00 AM)

    Expression of a divine love built in a strong seamless base, there is no chance to oxidation of that in the worthy mansion, thank you dear Dr.Poet,10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (2/14/2009 5:35:00 AM)

    A poem written fabulously woven with great rhymes and rhythm of the words...Beautiful lovers myth, soulful romanticism..10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 175 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (2/14/2009 2:10:00 AM)

    Good descriptive poem. The union of 'Prakrithi' and 'Purusha', the divine couple........a novel subject attempted. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,588 Points Sadiqullah Khan (2/14/2009 1:44:00 AM)

    The choice of title and what follows is a beautiful rythmic composition with an effort on rhyme. Well woven thoughts and fantastic imaginations.10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 13, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 12, 2013