A Manufactured Mind Poem by Renee Marie

A Manufactured Mind



Prepped in perfect privilege
Entrance here is gained
Honor rules of 'etiquette'
From challenge we'll abstain

Posture brow and jaw
Furrow nor clench be seen
Then neutral here we learn
Zipped lips though mind be keen

Your err a pompous flex;
'enlightened' egos teach
Stamp your student puppets,
An 'A' we're left to seek

For you have made it plain
Oh far-left demigod
We'll not dual principles
Nor dialouge to clog

Just keep things running smooth
Our master never bore
Your brilliance blinding me
I grope and bow some more

Fierce swaying left and right
My balance never won
Eighty-thousand later
The cap to air is flung

The truth be told just once
The world had hoped of Thee
A tug-o-war might yield
A mentor out of me - but

Serve me on a platter
Here at last I stand
Will it ever matter
That compliance made the man?

© Reneé Marie
1999

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this poem in 1999 after speaking with a teenaged college Freshman wanting to start a broad, political discussion group on his campus but a very Far Left (as he stated) professor censored his invitational posters around campus. That's all I remember. The poem was actually made into a heavy metal song by a group in France.
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Danbury, CT USA
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