* A Meeting Of The Minds * Poem by Linda Ori

* A Meeting Of The Minds *

Rating: 3.7


Two minds in sync
Have forged a link
One single thought
By two hearts caught;

You read my mind
And then unwind
My tangled thoughts
Connect my dots;

How clever this
Your honest bliss
Has touched my heart
Right from the start;

Reflecting me
You helped me see
A kindred soul
You made me whole.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 10 February 2008

Talk about being in sync! 4 Stanzas of 4 Lines of 4 Syllables Now, Midnight...Take a close look at the design of my breakdown of your poetic structuring.... That''' E ''stands for Excellent, young lass! And that applies to the storyline to boot! Frank/FjR

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Joseph Stotz 10 February 2008

Seus couldn't of made sweet love better

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Leonard Daranjo 10 February 2008

Magical rhythm. Couldn't be better. I really enjoyed this piece.

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Divine. t x

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Dr.subhendu Kar 23 February 2008

really a wonderful poem evoking the synchrinisation of two minds and souls resourced from dichotomous smiles, great write, i like it,10+, thanks for sharing yet with kind regards

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Alison Cassidy 22 February 2008

The pieces fit - like a jigsaw - in this superb poem about an extraordinary synchronicity that can occur between certain individuals. There are some people in life whose very presence gives one inspiration - to create, to solve problems, to go beyond the ordinary. You are lucky to have met such a one and the resultant expression of the experience is beautifully constructed. A work of art. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Melvina Germain 14 February 2008

Another beauty Linda, I love the first line 'Two minds in sync', I truly like the feel of it. Melvina

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Sid John Gardner. 13 February 2008

A nice one Linda.I could write such a poem but unfortunatly my world has unravelled completely. Sid x.

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 10 February 2008

so beautiful...............

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