A Merciless Curse Poem by Asif Andalib

A Merciless Curse

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Now the mirror inside me misses you so much
It tends to break into pieces without a touch!
Slowly the wound inside me becomes worse
So my life seems like a merciless curse!
The villains remind me why I am so good
But swiftly from bad to worse they change my mood!
My soul becomes heavy like a mountain
It makes me lazy again and again!
My sweet memories now give me so much pain
Day and night my eyes shed tears like monsoon rain!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anita Sehgal 28 May 2012

Read your poems. liked this one specially ... Touching poem

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Tiana Webb 03 May 2012

Sad poem, very sad. So much emotion and feelings poured into a poem. You captured the pain from the memories of the things and people we have missed and lost. I like it very much.

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Unwritten Soul 27 April 2012

Like a storm it damaging heart, in rainy tears...cloudy eyes...the strong wind in your write really feel and touch outside....i can see that and it really pain to only sense a memory that we missed and lost. Nice touch Asif_Unwritten Soul

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Asif Andalib

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Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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