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A Message To The Farmer

What life is this
Day after day
Stuck in this barn
Just eating hay? ,
All I can do is moo
To make a complaint
From me to you.

I can see you in my field
I`m sure more milk
Out there I`d yield,
I know you`re my friend
And you are kind
But why do you always
Leave me behind? .

Outside my barn icicles grow
Have you seen them
Do you know,
Why is your hair covered in frost
Where is your hat
Has it got lost? .

As you have kept me confined
To this barn
To amuse myself
I`ve spun you a yarn,
If in here I spend much more time
Perhaps I`ll be able to spin it in rhyme.

Now this poor cow`s tired
And off to sleep
My green pasture
Will have to keep.

Submitted: Friday, March 30, 2012
Edited: Friday, March 30, 2012


Comments about this poem (A Message To The Farmer by Heather P Wilson )

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  • Adeline Foster (2/8/2013 2:52:00 PM)

    Good poem. Read mine - Mitigation -
    Adeline

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  • * Sunprincess * (10/5/2012 9:11:00 PM)

    oh Heather I love this one..you took me to the farm and I loved it.. :)

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  • John Brown (8/28/2012 9:09:00 AM)

    Nice poem Heather. This farmer should be named and shamed... har har.

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  • Captain Cur (5/25/2012 8:29:00 AM)

    I enjoyed it very Moo...uch, Heather.
    Hold up, my milk is complaining about being
    holed up in its container.
    Must be from the same cow.

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  • Joseph Anderson (5/2/2012 1:18:00 PM)

    Growing up on a dairy farm, this gave me a great, big laugh. A well cadenced write. Oh! That poor cow

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  • Juan Olivarez (4/7/2012 6:52:00 PM)

    And she will probably add eat more chicken geat meter and rhyme.

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  • Cynthia Buhain-Baello (3/30/2012 7:35:00 AM)

    Very nice poem and the lovely personification of a cow speaking for itself makes it appealing - specially to the young readers (like me) .

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