A Messege Poem by Asif Baloch

My life ended in these few lines “O dear child we sent you in this world sent you to weep to cry we forgot to make someone who could be close to you but now it’s too late to make a new” Wonderful, very nice, I love it.

very touching, and inspiring- well dopne keep writing

But each one can smile And laugh it away, Just as you are doing And make your own way.

This was touching and sad. We as mortals have so many questions that can't be answered here on earth. Do we trust have faith and carry on till the time comes for answers. Yes in my opinion, blind faith.. all his children will be taken care of in time.

Intriguing poem. Every life has a purpose, even those whose lives are cut short.

I can consider the first part of this poem a very good depiction of the “Annunciation” and very up to date in its setting. A lot of good imagination. If I were an artist this scene would be worthwhile to paint. I would understand that the last part of the poem, “O dear child....” applies to your personal situation or could be understood to fit all those children who fall into this category. This really touches one’s heart to cry for all of them. This leads one to ask the question of the creator. “Why couldn’t you put a little more thought into what you were doing? ”