A Midnight In Bangalore-2 Poem by Abiee Josy

A Midnight In Bangalore-2

Rating: 5.0


MY FRIEND..
You lost the way out of me.
I simply dazzled around
looking after you.
The country we belong to
is expecting ours foot steps again.
'Common Rama-Laxman ' crying
out of rain.
Contrary, we head towards opposite direction.
... Heading to the sunshine, creating a painful fiction

I need to work you need to create
My friend. Cruel fact is that we r all separate.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 18 March 2012

A very powerful and well crafted write that clearly gives away: your poetic talent is obvious! WELCOME to the Poetry World! This amazing write has become your stepping stone toward the top of the Poetry World as long as you keep your emotions and desires alive! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! I look forward to read more of your poignant works! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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