A Million Pieces Poem by Shay Mitchell

A Million Pieces

Rating: 5.0


I went to bed crying,
I woke up hoping.
The day i told him good-bye,
Was the day i wanted to die.
The sound of his falling tears,
Tore my heart open to all fears.
He was my everything,
He was the only one to keep my heart beating.
I was so scared,
That he wouldn't care.
About all my pain,
And all my 'rain'.
That day i let him go,
Was the day my heart would go.
I'll never stop loving him,
Even after the day my heart stops bleeding.
Because my heart was broken,
Into a million pieces.
So i went to bed crying,
And woke up hoping.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny H 10 September 2009

This was beautiful., im so sorry why did you let him go? . Sometimes even though we feel we dont deserve someone, they were sent to us because we deserve them. Im such a hyprocrit to myself xD Kepe writing :)

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Marisol Smith 05 July 2009

very lovely peice...keep writing.. -mare

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Tom Balch 16 January 2009

This is a nice, heartfelt, and lovely piece,10 regards Tom

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