A Million Years To Sunday Poem by Jim Milks

A Million Years To Sunday

Rating: 5.0


I hold you close and lay your head upon my chest
I kiss your soft and pale cheek and whisper
“shhh little Dove, rest”

The broken glass sparkles like diamonds in the early morning sun
Reflecting on so many things that have been left undone
I shall keep you warm against cold and bitter wind

I know that I have sinned
And for that, for us there are no tomorrows
As I shall dwell forever in this well of sorrows

I can hear your heartbeat so soft so slow
“Oh God baby please don’t go”

I gently brush the red tears from your cold soft eyes
The sun shining on this tattered scene
One so sad and yet, somehow so serene

If I could pluck my heart from my chest
And place it in your dying breast I would
For just one moment, before you leave me for someplace above

Just so I could say on my dying lips
One last time
“I love you”

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Original Unknown Girl 06 November 2008

Great title, great poem. Enjoyed reading this. HG: -) xx

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Kesav Easwaran 02 July 2008

lines most touching, jim...sad and vibrant...good write

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Paul Butters 20 April 2008

Complete as well now (that you've retyped) . As I said, a moving and good poem. Paul.

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Paul Butters 20 April 2008

A moving poem Jim, well written. Just check line 2 - suggest change 'you' to your', and line 13 - change 'shinning' to 'shining'. Cheers. Paul.

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Interesting... sounds you know something the other person doesn't.... let them wait till Sunday, then... what if assumptions are wrong?

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