A Moment In Love On A Winter's Day. Poem by Gary Drake

A Moment In Love On A Winter's Day.



The night is black, The snow is clean,
Pray for us lovers caught between.
My love, this land may do me harm.
So take my hand and keep me warm.

Thursday, March 20, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This just came to me and I started work on a longer piece containing and trying to express the feeling of that day in a foreign country at war where I fell for a young lady because of the language-barrier we spoke little but her spirit filled me with joy...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thomas Vaughan Jones 04 April 2014

A nice little touch here Gary. It has an atmospheric sense about it. IMHO you need a pause between My love(,) and this. You should develop this poem further. It has promise.

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Gary Drake

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