! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! A Moment In Time! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Mamta Agarwal

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! A Moment In Time! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 2.6


Summer at peak;
a young man
in a white singlet.

Summer at peak;
a young girl
in short sleeves.

Summer at peak;
A child licks
Ice cream.

Summer at peak;
an infant
On inhaler.

Summer at peak;
A young couple
Cosy in cinema hall seats.

Summer at peak;
A vendor
Sells lime water.

Summer at peak;
Gulmohar petals
lie limp on grass.

Summer at peak;
Dust haze,
Road rage.

Summer at peak;
beads of sweat
slide on lips.

Summer at peak,
Street wars,
Blame it on heat.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 06 June 2009

A great poem with summer. You have observed from different corner. Sweet and cute poem with a lovely form.10+++

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Bob Blackwell 06 June 2009

Each moment is different for each of us, then it changes. Nice observing Mamta.

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Marieta Maglas 06 June 2009

''Summer at peak; an infant On inhaler'' just a moment in time 10++

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Sandra Martyres 06 June 2009

Lovely poetic observations on the expression of Summer for everyone...good write summer...

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Saadat Tahir 06 June 2009

hi mamta...u r very kind and partial to the sizzling summers nice poetic conect very nice lines cheers

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Sarwar Chowdhury 18 June 2009

truely poetic word-picure! insightul beauty here! 10+

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Raj Nandy 12 June 2009

The poem reflects a slice of realism, - indeed the summer in Delhi is at its peak! And the forecast is that every year this heat will gradually rise due to global warming! Alarming! 10! -Raj Nandy

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Sandra Fowler 11 June 2009

The imagery of summer.I can feel the warmth. But where do all those moments go? The leaves will be falling before you know it. Very nostalgic, Mamta. As always, Sandra

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Vidi Writes 08 June 2009

Summer at peak But you come up with this juicy greet Each word i pick With great devotion to marinate. Wow... i feel... let this poem don't end Let many more lines come in blend A joy ride with great append. Thank you dear poet for this wonderful write.

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trueli at it's peak......

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