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A Moment Of Paradise

Truly speaking
believe it or not
but it is true

on 16th March,
i had a dream
at about 03.00 a.m.

i was gazing at the sky
i was seeing
two Angels folding their hand
came down from sky
landed on earth and stood
before me.

i was surprised and
thought, it was a shape
or like me, to be confirmed
i touched one angel
with my fore finger

they both smiled and
flew away to the sky
crossing the clouds
they became vanished

i was gazing and thinking
was it a dream or true
thanks God! I realised
a moment of Paradise.

Submitted: Saturday, March 17, 2012
Edited: Saturday, March 17, 2012


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  • Hazel Evelyn Durham (9/22/2012 6:34:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem so original full of spirit and wonder!

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  • Anhelica Velasquez (3/23/2012 6:44:00 PM)

    i like it. it tells a story and plus its pretty

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  • Dave Walker (3/23/2012 8:24:00 AM)

    A really beautiful poem, like it.

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  • Lord's Gift (3/17/2012 7:35:00 AM)

    Wonderful Story! There is angels & Jesus is Lord; There is a God the Lord Jesus Christ.

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