A Monkey Of My Apple Tree Poem by Vishal Sharma

A Monkey Of My Apple Tree

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we are just familiar with our great ancestors
who taught us a way to lead this beautiful life
and we are ultimately losing their faith
are we leading the life the way they imagined
they were innocent, they were pious in nature
they really taught us the reasons for our survival,
and the way we mislead them, is this a fair cheating,
yeah, surely it is, as we are not proving to be humans
and the hate virus inside us has made us a virus too
these are my captured thoughts i feel it free
whenever i look at the monkey of my apple tree.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vishal Sharma 16 October 2015

thought provoking poetry

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Hazel Durham 17 June 2013

Soul searching for truth and goodness and to stamp out the awful decay that is hate! Hate breeds misery and evil to destroy ourselves in the end! An excellent write!

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Payal Parande 17 June 2013

If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other. Mother Teresa beautiful thinking Vishal just keep your thoughts running like that and you'll be a fine writer one day

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Farah Ilyas 17 June 2013

wao what a metaphorical use of virus, monkey & tree, virus of hypocrisy, envy & prejudice spoiling the innocence & our beliefs...well done Vishal u created very thought provoking poem

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Survi Sharma 17 June 2013

nice sentiment i like it very much great write vishal

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