A Morning With My Muse Poem by Greg Davidson

A Morning With My Muse

Rating: 5.0


Between unconsciousness and waking,
While night birds sing late lullabies,
Stars turn to sleeping in their beds
And morning summons greying skies.

She comes to me, my Calliope,
With crown of gold and champagne eyes.
She bids me come to Xanadu.
A dexter wink and off she flies.

'Neath clouds brushed by Dawn's golden hue,
Past gulls upon their morning chore,
Their calls rebuked by the breakers',
Hush and hush against the shore.

Across the sands of desolation,
Across the mountains of despair,
To a garden rich in wonder,
By the pleasure dome built there.

I walk through blooms of saffron yellow,
Past fruits on branches hanging low.
Streams beside of living water
Whisper comfort as I go.

I harvest from the fruit above me,
‘Neath a tree I pause to eat.
Down my chin runs tears of nectar,
Like memories, both bitter-sweet.

Then ancient fears return to haunt me,
Deep in the undergrowth they lie,
Invisible, silent, waiting.
Never real but always nigh.

I wake as words cascade about me,
Then tumble down onto the floor.
Random rhymes run intermingled,
And simile chase metaphor.

They gather in the hidden places,
In the dark behind the door.
There they pool in half-formed poems,
Staggered lines of three or four.

They scuttle along the skirting boards
In rhyming couplets, as a dare,
Or sit atop the window frame
Just to mock me from up there.

Calliope gathers up her words,
She winks and laughs then fades to grey.
My verse, unpenned, still incomplete,
'Til my muse returns to play.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Calliope - One of the three Muses of poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Billsborough 04 September 2016

The poem has a lot going for it. Your sense of rhythm is impeccable. The word painting glorious and the problem you address is common to us all. I have one poem which has been in that half formed stage for months. It sits on top of my Current Work Word file glaring at me like a Gargoyle! I manage to skip over it but one day it'll bite me. Maybe I could borrow Calliope, if you could spare her for a while!

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