A Moth Sees A Flame Afar Poem by nimal dunuhinga

A Moth Sees A Flame Afar

Rating: 5.0


When the Sun and Moon were angry
You could see what they call Eclipse?
There he goes in the darkness searching a Superstar.
Stars never come down from the serene sky my dear
And he weeps in the milky way.

* You could see more things in the darkness.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 02 October 2008

Your beautiful allegory is melancholy and yet it raises a smile at the same time. Bitter-sweet penning. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 24 September 2008

There is pain in this fragile view of the skyscape. A poem of longing for something beyond the darkness. Lovely, Nimal. Warm regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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