Dustin Bennefield

Rookie (Semptember 11,1991 / GA)

A Mother Child


A mother is a child
She is younger than her children
That is why she learns from them
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Comments about this poem (A Mother Child by Dustin Bennefield )

  • Rookie - 7 Points Tailor Bell (7/28/2006 5:33:00 AM)

    Wonderfully flowing, familiar to everyone yet quite special in itself. Very nicely done. -T. Bell (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Daniel Tyler (7/19/2006 4:29:00 PM)

    'A mother is a child
    She is younger than her children
    That is why she learns from them'

    Those lines rival anything I've seen these past few months for sheer poetic excellence- indeed the whole poem is mature, concise and insightful. Your poems are written fror a reason and I like that. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Leigh A. Hill (6/16/2006 7:37:00 PM)

    what a different poem. no one writes like this anymore.
    i love it.
    love always,
    starr (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Evan Moulson (6/9/2006 8:31:00 PM)

    Wow, quite an amazing, touching poem....lots of imagry....excellent. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Troy Younts (6/9/2006 7:01:00 PM)

    '...A being not be seen...' A typo I think but otherwise a very touching poem, congrats! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Geoff Warden (6/6/2006 7:07:00 PM)

    You my young sir......are spectacular (Report) Reply

  • Rookie David Gerardino (6/5/2006 11:36:00 PM)

    Of overcoming sin, you have some good lines (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dustin Bennefield (5/25/2006 4:31:00 PM)

    please comment thanks alot.......... Inkweaver (Report) Reply

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