~ A Mountain To Climb Poem by Sonya Florentino

~ A Mountain To Climb

Rating: 4.9


I don’t know what I’m holding on to

I only know I want to let go

My fingers are bleeding

My hands are slipping

My body is breaking

My spirit wearing... my foothold

Is gone


I don’t know what I’m holding on for

I am blinded by my tears

Crippled by doubt and fear

Is this a mountain I must climb?

What is it I hope to find?


But I’ve made up my mind

I want to get to the other side

I’m not blindly holding on

I am holding on … for dear life

This is a mountain I must climb

This is a mountain...

And I will survive.


© 2009 Sonya Florentino

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Matt Mooney 06 August 2009

Yesterday I had the pleasure of going around to the back of a mountain in a boat with friends on the Lakes of Killarney. It took some time but it was worth it. We didnt have to climb it. Instead we had a view of it from every direction. and enjoyed the boat trip as well. Your poem is a great description of the struggle to survive on your own terms. I quote you a line also by Walter Macken in his book on the Irish Famine of 1845 entitled Seek the Fair Land -'Seek the fair land that lies over the brow of the hill.

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Sandra Fowler 03 April 2009

You have the spirit to survive. Strength for the journey, my friend. Very well written. As always, Sandra

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Laurie Hill 02 April 2009

The strength that you portray in this work is so very strong, against all odds and despair. The mountain is your biggest challenge in life and you will win through...10

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Duh Huh 25 March 2009

Yes you will survive. We women have an innate will to survive, if not for ourselves for the love of our own, that is incomparable. This poem is very touching with its hidden strength. If its more than a poem, please do feel free to contact me if you need a friend or maybe just a listening ear :)

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Sonya Florentino

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Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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