A Name For My Daughter Poem by hamid kareem

Hamid, a lovely poem. I too love my daughter greatly. Daughters are embodiments of love & affection and no wonder we get swayed. As in your apt words, they are truly beautiful in their innermost heart beyond imagination.

The content of this is beautiful, but it would benefit from a little revision, possibly adding some punctuation.

Ah, name with such thought put into it. :)

Hi man you really impressed me.. this is a poem reflecting the matured innocence... nice thought keep the spirt alive.. live in present think the future gr8 attitude...

I really enjoyed reading this although I believe Saurabh Som was right about the rythme not being definite. There are two things I would write differently. I would change this lines: 'dressed in clothes of silk ' to this: 'dressed in silk cloth' I would also change the 'tis' in the last line to 'it's' Overall, you've captured the emotion perfectly and I believe the impact poetry has emotionally on it's readers is by far the most important thing. In this you have succeed where many others don't. Well done.

lovely poem you've written.

a.love for kids and daughter. indeed wonderful. voted10 surya

Daughters are divine gift. A comely poem.

lovvvvvvvvli poem i lovvvvvvvvv vit -10 anjali

this poem is very touching. I love it