A New Memoir Of An Evolutionary Eyewitness Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

A New Memoir Of An Evolutionary Eyewitness

Rating: 5.0


On a river’s current
On a shining waves
Gently floating on
Its charming risings

Under a thick dome of The Avatar
Where white roses entwined together
One hand reaches where spring sleeps
My kiss dissolve silence that makes you mine!

I gave my song to the moon, to the sun
Always with true faith in hour of holy
Even you, O Princess, watch the stars
That tremble with love and with hope

Ah, the marriage hymn plays!
The ceremony for us draws near!
Happiness! Give me your right hand!
The sacred torches, shining brilliantly all around!

To me you have been given by God
The sweet sound, hugs me, heavenly voice!
Oh, joy that one feels and does not speak of!
Oh, wondrous day! At last, I am yours, you are mine

From peaceful heaven a smile
The life to us will be gorgeous
Every pleasure is more grateful
To me, with you, more thankful

I never did harm to a living soul!
Nobody shall sleep!
I lived for my art!
I lived for love!

On the river bank
Covered with flowers
Smiling in the morning
Let us descend together!

(dedicated to a great poet at poemhunter, Subbaraman N V)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 12 April 2009

a great write and nice to read..well penned..

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Ramesh T A 12 April 2009

Evolving poetry with the background of Nature enriches the mind with freshness of Nature!

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Rajaram Ramachandran 12 April 2009

I feel myself young like you when I read this poem.

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Your poem speaks of love and joy. I thought the last four lines were delightful. You have put so much thought into this beautiful piece of work. Top marks Karin Anderson

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Maria Barbara Korynt 12 April 2009

Love which you are describing, is fine and clean, worth every sacrifice. Wonderfully! Very much I like him. 'I never did harm to a living soul! Nobody shall sleep! I lived for my art! I lived for love! On the river bank Covered with flowers Smiling in the morning Let us descend together! ' - this is very beautiful! Greetings for you :) Maria Barbara Korynt

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Subbaraman N V 17 May 2009

I am indeed beholden to you for your love and respect! May God bles you! Do many more such beautiful poems!

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Sonya Florentino 14 April 2009

a glorius celebration of a new life...

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Antonio Liao 14 April 2009

oh! wonderful land I believe. that you see...you have very beautiful imagination so perfect of the heart that call to calm the roaring sea....listen as I whisper the Shinning star that looks beneath the golden daffodils.....seems I carried out by your mystic’s words...of a new Memoir of a new you...my friend... thank you and God speed...a 10+

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Louis Rams 13 April 2009

two hearts joined in heavenly bliss. very good

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Kranthi Pothineni 13 April 2009

I like the way you structured your thoughts. Nice.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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