Rani Turton


A Niche For Me in Your Heart


If you have some place
Some place you could well spare
Make a niche for me in your heart
To warm me within your space
I will never, never depart.

I will be more than a name and face
If you could grant me this grace
I would be more than a queen
To live in this honoured place
I would be part of your present
Not a part of your past
If only time would linger on
And make this dream last and last.

A silly poem it seems
But then, so are many dreams.

Submitted: Tuesday, May 06, 2008

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  • Rookie - 299 Points Adeline Foster (9/2/2011 5:16:00 PM)

    Enjoy the way you write. I am sure you would like mine - Sonnet Beyond Love -
    Adeline (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ravinder Malhotra (12/6/2009 12:22:00 PM)

    Mercifully there are poets who write something that has substance and emotion adnd their poetry can be enjoyed. How do we at 'Poets of Delhi' invite you to our readings? . (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 47 Points Meggie Gultiano (7/25/2009 8:18:00 AM)

    I would be part of your present....I love this line, Rani.
    And mind you, this is not a silly piece.This comes from a very
    loving and sweet heart..

    Hugs from here,
    Meggie (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Indira Babbellapati (1/16/2009 12:27:00 PM)

    silliness renders more sweetness once one is in love... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Sílvia Oliveira (7/8/2008 12:17:00 PM)

    Dear Rani,

    I do like this one of yours! It touches my heart!

    Congrats from Brasil!
    Sílvia (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mamta Agarwal (7/8/2008 8:00:00 AM)

    its thruogh dreams we realise what we long for, a sweetlove poem, expressing the longing for a loved one. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (5/18/2008 8:52:00 AM)

    how i wish you could be in my heart rani. excellent piece. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Onelia Avelar (5/17/2008 6:28:00 AM)

    A very very cosy warm niche in someones heart you just built, Rani. Nice imagery of a nice weird place for living, while we love someone. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Lynda Robson (5/16/2008 9:51:00 AM)

    This is so sweet Rani, written from your heart, thank you
    Lynda xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 96 Points Vidyadhara ..... (5/16/2008 7:56:00 AM)

    All poetry are mostly product of imagery.This one too is good combination of imagination, words and emotions.Not at silly.good one (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vidi Writes (5/11/2008 4:59:00 AM)

    May be this is one of such
    Most aspired spaces
    Where dwell seems to be
    A great gain, a solace.
    Not a house, no lock and key
    The cost is not known
    But seems exorbitant.
    A niche, ever and ever
    Poignantly craved for
    Never known to happen.

    Delicately engraved one.
    Enjoyed it.
    Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rema Prasanna (5/10/2008 2:04:00 AM)

    I did not feel it silly, it is full of dreams and it emerges from aspiration, good feel in those lines, very expressive, well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Emancipation Planz (5/8/2008 1:49:00 AM)

    Rani... have to agree.. do not belittlest.... niches are what make locks and keys in life fit together... (ok enzymes as well I suppose) .... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Duncan Wyllie (5/7/2008 2:21:00 PM)

    Please do not question your authentisity, your words are beautiful
    Love duncan X (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Original Unknown Girl (5/7/2008 7:54:00 AM)

    Not silly at all, truly written from one heart to another. I loved the simplicity in your request. Lovely. HG: -) xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Priyanka Shetty (5/7/2008 7:02:00 AM)

    i loved this poem...... keep writing like magic....... :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Broken Peaces (5/7/2008 6:17:00 AM)

    There is many a niche in many mens hearts for a sweetis like you and I bet you walk in their dreams to big ten for a nice warm poem Chris (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 62 Points Kesav Easwaran (5/7/2008 2:47:00 AM)

    rani, a place already warm is ready here... you may move in and make it warmer!
    a poem sweet and luring… (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Abha Sharma (5/7/2008 2:15:00 AM)

    Who says it is silly…it is as beautiful as a dream………….and when accomplished it will be great…this niche for love will always last…a soothing poem…
    **Abha** (Report) Reply

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