A Night Of Feeling This Way Poem by Desiree Whitamore

A Night Of Feeling This Way

Rating: 4.0


i couldn't help but to see you.
i couldn't help but to hear
your take on the world around you
your take on not being there.
its funny how you thought i'd keep falling
how you thought you were so right
and how since i was just a teenager
well, what did i know about life?
did you know that you were wrong?
Did you know i'm already grown?
and god i know it didn't take that long
but i did it all on my own.
I know that it rains sometimes
and the world around me might melt
i can see right through your eyes
but can you see how bad i've felt?
I know there is so much left to write.
so much left to say.
but i guess i just stay up all night
to feel this way.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 26 July 2008

I can certainly recommend this piece of poetry to any reader because it is very reader friendly. These are quite rare these days. The meaning also comes through. Bravo! GW62

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