A Nightmare Poem by Eindaray Kyaw

A Nightmare

Rating: 4.5


A storm in a teacup
You said me, 'The die is cast! '

I hoped a chance to know earlier
You have a Jekyll and Hyde character!

But..now, all I dreamed are chaos
Even castles in the air run across!

Within the few twinklings of my eye
A pain forced my heart to cry!

All I received from you, my dear
For a long time, just crocodile tears!

Still remembering we're old flame
It's only me worth to be blamed! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zero Ro 22 August 2012

You just need to ignore whatever if you are intension for this person true. If not, it is worth to do.

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Nader Baheri 09 July 2013

nicely penned in flowing lines~nb

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 22 January 2013

this is lovely with good rhymes. loves it.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 14 September 2012

Good rhyming.

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Duran Jose 12 September 2012

Well done using 2 line stanzas the rhythm is great

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Sunny Rose 04 September 2012

The 2nd stanza is beautiful

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Eindaray Kyaw

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