A One Time Trip! (Suggestive) Poem by Geoff Warden

A One Time Trip! (Suggestive)

Rating: 5.0


Deep entrancement,
The moment of truth,
The question.....can I,
The dare.....step forth....

Red rose no more,
A no power flower,
Deep touch....becons more
look close....forget a'more...

Hands of embrace,
seek wonder of lust,
trails ablaze....fingers search,
camber curve...nerves learch...

Each hill an' valley,
spinail cords length,
entrace slow...shivers quail,
small of back....massage' sale...

Back of knees,
twinge with delight,
three fingers...vigarous move...
Feel heat.....find groove...

Encircle the cap,
ever upward in motion,
the question...can I,
the answer....dare I.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Gale 28 October 2006

Ok, my glass of merlot is now bubbling from the heat of this write..... whew... Well done!

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Linda Ori 29 October 2006

Well, you're this far, might as well go for broke! Or are you a tease? Pretty hot stuff there, Geoff. LInda

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Original Unknown Girl 29 October 2006

Wow Geoff.... back of the knees had me! Get yourself on that trip.... go for it! Love the tease of this one...... great write. HG xx

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He who dares wins. And a winner of a piece this is, for sure. G, my hat off to you. t x

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M S 31 October 2006

Oh I think you already have, sir Geoff... its nice to see that the night in shining armour has a naughty side. A thrilling write

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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 19 April 2007

Well, thats quite the trip Geoff! Thanx for making me ((Smile)) ! ! Great poem with a Great title! =Shelley=

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JoAnn McGrath 14 April 2007

Wow...my screen just shattered and my glasses Well done without saying the words

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Dee Daffodil 30 January 2007

Whew! ! ! Is it hot in here? ? ? Eye-cheee-wow-wow! ! Hugs, Dee

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Duncan Wyllie 23 December 2006

A brilliant explanation of deep feelings that need to branch out Beautifully placed Geoff Well done again my friend Love duncan X

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Melvina Germain 03 November 2006

An absolutely senuous experience here, with no holding back. Excellent-----Melvina

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