A Painful Freedom Poem by Udaya R. Tennakoon

A Painful Freedom

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A long short story of a broken structure
Keeping a coma, though the dove flew away
At the love hate mixed home, finally hate won and over came
Written life chapters give a lighter burden

Many times to end for the endless boring
For more than one reasons couldn´t put the full stop
The decision was knocked at the door by your hand
Packed up the life to leave your home even it's a pain

To give a kiss for little ones so hurting
They know the fire and smoke up to the roof blowing
Inside heart dies and burns so this life suffering
Everyone is a part of that all may have this feeling

I am the victim, I am the committer sentence is the pain
Leave you, leave here, all will consume a freedom
Point your finger, blast your anger and cast at me in thunder
Take I all and no any word to claim or blame as it gives an end

Sunday, April 10, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: freedom,painful,separation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jayatissa K. Liyanage 10 April 2016

Burning fire within a heart is realistically expressed. Thanks for sharing.

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