Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson

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A Pantoum- Dancing under the stars Poem by Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson


As she dances under the moonlit stars
Feeling the adrenalin rushing through her veins
For now she is alone, but not lonely
She makes her own music as her heart beats in time

Feeling the adrenalin rushing through her veins
Passers by shoot a glance as her aura reflects
She makes her own music as her heart beats in time
She loves to perform, dancing is her life

Passers by shoot a glance as her aura reflects
For now she is alone, but not lonely
She loves to perform, dancing is her life
As she dances under the moonlit stars

Submitted: Sunday, June 11, 2006

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,295 Points David Harris (3/30/2007 4:19:00 PM)

    Lisa, this one is gorgeous, you could almost sing it as a lyric. I loved it. Top marks from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend.
    David (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Barbara Attaway (1/29/2007 8:06:00 AM)

    This and the previous poem truly make me want to get up early to watch the sunrise and throw my arms out and twirl around... just me and God! Lovely poem. Barb (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Kimberly Kastner (7/17/2006 4:51:00 PM)

    I agree with Brian-this poem does have a wonderful aura, just like the dancer. Well done! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Brian Dorn (6/24/2006 10:20:00 AM)

    Like the dancer, this poem has a wonderful aura... well done! !
    Brian (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Sylvia Spencer (6/23/2006 6:15:00 PM)

    Lisa another wonderful poem that has you feeling on top of the world, my life resembles this poem so much, brilliant work cheers Sylviex (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alison Cassidy (6/22/2006 2:20:00 AM)

    Lisa, this one speaks to me - volumes. I know how she feels. To dance is to live! A lovely pantoon. love, Allie XX (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Scarlett Treat (6/20/2006 6:38:00 PM)

    Strange, I see her 'aloneness' but she does not seem to feel it at all. She is perfectly happy in her dancing - how charming...and well done on the form too! Good write.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Duncan Wyllie (6/18/2006 12:03:00 PM)

    For now she is alone, but not lonely
    She makes her own music as her heart beats in time
    I can not add to this,
    Love Duncan X (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (6/11/2006 11:58:00 AM)

    What wonderful music this poem makes. It is lovely, Lisa.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

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